the old fisherman
searched the vast storm torn shoreline
seeking what he lost
wind plaiting his beard
water rims his ice-blue eyes
as thoughts crash like waves
from the sea she came
brilliant, shining like birdsong
stepping through the tide
she stripped off her coat
let her hair flow down her back
and stretched up her arms
seeing her fay face
he felt breath within him catch
dreamed of what could be
she did not spy him
steal up to her dropped wrapping
carried off to hide
he called her Jenny
placed gold ‘round her finger
held her to his heart
she was to be his
though a wistful wife she made
looking to the sea
when she found her pelt
hidden deep in his sea chest
she felt her heart rise
returned to the sea
he was left to watch the waves
take his selkie bride
searched the vast storm torn shoreline
seeking what he lost
wind plaiting his beard
water rims his ice-blue eyes
as thoughts crash like waves
from the sea she came
brilliant, shining like birdsong
stepping through the tide
she stripped off her coat
let her hair flow down her back
and stretched up her arms
seeing her fay face
he felt breath within him catch
dreamed of what could be
she did not spy him
steal up to her dropped wrapping
carried off to hide
he called her Jenny
placed gold ‘round her finger
held her to his heart
she was to be his
though a wistful wife she made
looking to the sea
when she found her pelt
hidden deep in his sea chest
she felt her heart rise
returned to the sea
he was left to watch the waves
take his selkie bride
1 comment:
I like the changes you made. It makes much more sense now. We start the poem with the fisherman after he's lost his selkie.
It's nice.
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